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업무 이메일에서 자주 쓰이는 전형적인 표현들.

인사 / 첫 문장

  • [Name] here, CTO at Boxcom. : 자기 소개. "여기 Boxcom CTO Ethan입니다" 정도의 가벼운 톤
  • Wanted to share a few updates and work on scheduling an upcoming visit. : 첫 문단 시작. 주어 "I" 생략으로 비즈니스 톤
  • Great to reconnect with you as well. : 오랜만에 다시 연락된 상대에게
  • Thanks for the follow-up, and for the additional context. : 후속 메일에 답장할 때 도입부
  • Thanks [Name], great catching up yesterday. : 어제/최근에 통화·미팅한 상대에게
  • Appreciate the note and the updates on the roadmap. : "Thanks" 대신 격식 있는 답례

사람 소개 / cc 추가

  • I'd like to introduce you to Marcus Park — he leads our developer platform team on our side.
  • He'd be the right person to connect with for the training sessions and business review during your visit. : "그쪽이 적임자"
  • Please feel free to coordinate with him directly. : 위임 마무리 멘트
  • Looping in Oliver and Sophia (cc'd) who are helping to coordinate on our end. : cc 추가하면서 역할 명시
  • I'll let them follow up on this thread to connect with Marcus. : 이후 응답 권한 위임

일정 조율

  • Let us know if there is a good slot during that week. : 시간대 열어두는 톤
  • Would next Tuesday or Wednesday after 4pm PT work for you (I believe that's Wednesday or Thursday morning your time)? : 시차까지 변환해주는 배려
  • Here are a few times I'm available next week or the week after: : 옵션 나열 도입
  • Let me know what works, and I can send over a calendar invite.
  • Feel free to send the calendar invite. : 상대가 보낸다고 했을 때 OK 답
  • I'll coordinate the meeting time through Leo and get back to you.

결정 통보 / 입장 전달

  • After careful consideration, given the current global economic environment and our budget constraints, we've decided not to proceed with the renewal. : 거절을 부드럽게
  • We've carefully reviewed your latest offer and discussed it with our C-level leadership. : 충분히 검토했음을 강조
  • We appreciate that this represents your best effort on our behalf. : 상대 노력 인정 후 거절로 연결
  • Our position was conveyed by Marcus earlier this month. : 입장은 이미 전달됨을 환기
  • To reiterate what I communicated on April 10th: this is a final decision at our C-level and is not subject to renegotiation on commercial terms. : 재협상 차단 라인
  • It is not a reflection of dissatisfaction with Boxcom's product — the value delivered to individual users is well recognized internally. : 제품 가치 인정 ≠ 결정 번복

조건부 / 여지 남기기

  • A direct follow-up could make sense — though I'd like time to weigh the next step once we've had a more concrete exchange of information. : "could" + "though"로 조건부 수용
  • if Ethan has anything he'd like to share, he's welcome to reach out. : 문은 열어두되 적극 초대는 아님
  • We'd welcome the opportunity to stay connected on that front. : 관계는 유지하겠다는 톤
  • We don't have anything specific in mind yet — it was more about keeping the door open for future possibilities. : 구체안 없음을 솔직하게

정보 공유 / 본론 도입

  • Ahead of our call today, I'd like to share some additional background on our decision. : 미팅 직전 사전 공유
  • I hope the points below help round out that picture. : 보충 설명을 부드럽게 연결
  • Much of this context has already been shared with the Boxcom team by Leo over the past months, so parts of it may be familiar. : "이미 공유된 내용이라 익숙할 수도" — 신규 정보 아님을 사전 차단
  • Specific figures and comparative data are not something we're able to share, and we'd appreciate your understanding on that point. : 비공개 라인 + 양해 요청

끝맺음

  • Looking forward to hearing your thoughts on our conversation.
  • Let me know once you've shared your feedback, and we can go from there. : 다음 단계로 자연스럽게
  • As always, let me know if there's anything I can do to support the partnership from the leadership side. : 리더십 차원에서 돕겠다는 클로징
  • Please feel free to let us know if there's anything else we can help with.
  • If anything more concrete takes shape through discussions with our internal teams, we'll be sure to follow up. : 구체화되면 다시 연락

정정 / 재발송

  • (Resending as I missed the CC list) : cc 빠뜨려서 재발송할 때
  • To clarify, the updated option is approved based on an early renewal that would need to be completed in April. : 한번 더 명확히
  • We're on the same page about the contract not auto-renewing while we work on the new structure. : "같은 입장"임을 확인